Wednesday, July 17, 2019

Raika Days ch16-20

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Got a couple of summer chapters to go along with the season. There's also some big milestones that show this is going to get better: the first chapter that doesn't start with that stock line, and the first chapter where Raika's flaws feel more human than some kind of character quirk (the curry one). Though it's a little weird that there's discussion about certain characters being sexy when they're all 12 year olds... Well, it's played for laughs so whatever.

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